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Fiolee and finnceline fanfic. Chapter 18

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Fiolee and Finnceline  fanfic. Chapter 18
Sorry for the lateness had to do a writing project...who thinks I will get and A?

No ones POV: 
Fionna and Marceline walked back to Marshall and Finn. In about five minutes they arrived, and the guys were gone. 

FI: "marshal..?"

M: "Finn..?" 
They turned to each other.
FI: "where are they?"

M: "they could have went to your house."

FI: "let's check at yours also...it's closer."
Marceline nodded on agreement.
~at Marceline's house~
FI: "where could they be..?!"
Fionna was starting to worry.
M: "I don't know, I'm getting worried."

FI: "me too. Come on let's check at the treehouse."
They left her house and started to walk over the hills. Halfway there, over the the last hill, they saw two shadows.
Fionna: "Marcie look.!"
She pointed to the shadows.
M: "come on let's go.!"
Marceline flew toward them, while fionna ran. They got to the shadows in three minutes exact. 
FI: "M-marshall...thank god we....-"
She looked up and both Finn and marshall were passed out.
FI: "BROTHER..! MARSHALL!"
Marceline and fionna picked their brothers up and walked them to the treehouse. 

~at the treehouse~
C: "what happened!?"
Fionna and Marcie set them on the couch.
FI: "we don't know. Can you help?"

C: "I can get the first aid kit and wrap the wounds."

M: "thanks cake."
She ran to get the medicine, Finn started to open his eyes. 
M: "U-uhm...I-I gotta go."
Fionna grabbed her arm
FI: "no stay. I know it's hard, but try and smooth things out."
He opened his eyes slowly
F: "m-Marcie..?"
She looked away
M: "yeah, it's me, I'm sorry, I couldn't control it."
He smiled
F: "I know, don't worry about it."

M: "HOW CAN I NOT,"She started to cry, "I-I don't wanna hurt you!"
Finn put his hand on her face.
F: "Marcie...we can do this, just trust me."
Marceline couldn't reply, she was crying to much.
FI: "Finn, brother. What happened?"
He looked in fionna's direction, she was crying too.
F: "marshall was carrying me and he lost his strength and collapsed."

FI: " that doesn't explain why you were passed out!"

F: "....I tried to carry him."
The girls gasped 
M: "why, you were hurt, because of me! Finn, I can't do this. I can't hurt you then carry on. I'm leaving Ooo."

Fionna: "are you crazy!? Why!?"

M: "FIONNA DON'T TRY AND STOP ME! I'm not taking marshall. DON'T TELL HIM!"

Fionna: "FINN ARE YIU GOING TO LET HER DO THIS.!?"
Fionna turned away from Marcie and saw he passed out again.
M: "he isn't awake, good. Well bye fionna, Finn, brother."

Fionna:" MARCELINE IM NOT GOI-"
Marceline knocked her out with the back of her hand.
M: "sorry fionna."
She went over to Finn and kissed his lips. A minute later there were tears on his face and, in a flash, she was gone. Away from Ooo, and away from Finn.
Cake saw it all. She dropped the first aid kit in shock. Marceline turned around and froze.

~end of part 18~
NOTE: I'm so serious this wi Fi sucks! So I have to upload them all at school most I the time. And fall break is this coming this week!?
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Annabel829's avatar
LOL when Marceline said im leaving Ooo i just said "Oooooooo" and then i realized i did that