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Fiolee and Finnceline Fanfic. Chapter 11

No one's POV:
When Fionna turned the sharp corner,she found herself at a strange forest. She turned around and read the sign: Old Candy Forest.

FI: "old..? Hmpf...not that scary..!"
She ran trough the trees,hoping to find a way out.
~few hours later~
Fionna was still in the forest,kinda creeped out because she hasn't found the exit,yet.

FI: "If..only marshall was here..." she murmmerd to herself..

ML: "worried about me?"
She jumped.
FI: "STOP DOING THAT!"
He smiled,showing one of his fangs,Fionna blushed.

FI: "you know a way outta here?"

ML: "yea...why?"

FI: "just tell me where to go!"

ML: "....up.."

FI: "What do you me-"
Marshal picked Fionna up and she was saying that,but her screams interuptted her shortly after.
FI: "YOU HEFFER! LET ME DOWN!"

ML: "you sure??"
She realized what he was going to do.
FI: "N-No...."

ML: "good...not how about we go to my hiding place?"
Fionna smiled
FI: "sounds good to me!"
they laughed and he zipped trough the sky,wind blowing in their hair.
FI: :"WHOO HOO.!!"
Marshall laughed at her shout and flew faster.
After a few minutes he noticed,it was a little quiet.

ML: "Yo, Fi, you O.K?"
He looked down and she was gone.
ML: "what the..?!?"
Marshall stopped in mid-air looking frantically trough the forest.
ML: "FIONNA!" he called multiple times.
He noticed something shimmer,on the ground,he raced toward it.
~after he landed in the bushes behinde where the shinny thingy was~
FI: "what the cabbage is your problem Flame Prince!?! I dumped you a long time ago!"

FP (Flame Prince): "for that stuck-up Vampire huh?"

FI: "N-NO!"
He smacked her,Marshall grew with rage.

FI: "Y-you...hit me."
And he did it again.
ML: "YO! hothead. Don't touch her.

FP: "oh...shit...Marshall."
Flame prince kissed Fionna and in a blink of an eye, he was gone.

ML: "are you O.K Fi?"

FI: "my face is sore,but it doesn't hurt that bad."
Marshall kissed where she rubbed her face.
ML: "better now?"
She blushed
FI: "much"

ML: "Fionna......are you still in love with Flame Prince?"

FI: "W-what....WHY would you ask that..?!?"

ML: "I saw your face when he kissed you..."
Marshall turned around.
FI: ".....Marshall....no...I mean he..just."

ML: "Fi...I mean fionna...just stop pretending..I know you still love him."

FI: "MASHALL...I DON'T!"
She started to tear up.
ML: "JUST SAVE IT....now bye...and tell Finn he can see my sister now..But, I'm not seeing you."
He lifted off the ground and took off.
FI: "MARSHALL!!!"
Fionna slumped to the ground,crying.
After a few minutes she heard Finn.

F: "Fionna? What's wrong?"
She weakly looked up,and Finn saw he tears.

F: "Did marshall do this!?!"

FI: "NO....but he said that you can see Marceline.."
She got up and walked away from finn.
F: ~"what happened to her?"~

~end of part 11~
note= im really proud of this one xD...! hope y'all like...er...LOVEE it!
Heck yea!

:iconfinnthehumanplz: MATHMATICAL! OFF TO SEE MARCIE!

:iconfionnaplz: ....not mathmatical....never seeing him again.

:iconflameprinceplz: <_< all you fault FP how dare you break up Fiolee!
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:iconkitty2face2:
FP how dare u???
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:iconbloomthepowerpuff:
BloomThePowerPuff Mar 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconfinnthehumanplz:
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:iconwallebob:
WALLEBob Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm thinking about introducing Flame Prince as a villain in my current fanfiction
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snowmanpopicle Oct 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yea I like him being a villain ^_^
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WALLEBob Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good. I still hope that they establish him as a character in the next fionna and cake episode, but I really hope they don't pull that a Marshall thing again (introduce a character, but he/she doesn't speak)
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snowmanpopicle Oct 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Haha right I was so mad when they didn't let him talk.
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:iconwallebob:
WALLEBob Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, but he will most likely talk in the next fionna and cake ep.
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ilovefiolee Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dam that flame prince
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:iconiloveart100:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrr FP
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:iconlittle-and-proud:
FIOLEE WILL LIVE FP ! THEY WILL!!!!!!!!!
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